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« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2007, 12:11:13 AM »

Awkward.

The thought manifested itself on all four faces. Min opened her mouth to return the greeting but Myrnal's signature tact and social finesse got the two men before she did.

"So. Awkward silence. We going to sit here like weirdos or is someone going to make asinine and meaningless conversation?"

Minshara rubbed her temples and stifled a laugh, the corners of her lips already curled into a smile as her eyes fought to keep it down. They might be paid to kill her but there was no need to use the phrase 'asinine and meaningless', funny and truthful as it was. If they were going to kill her, it didn't really matter how she reacted but if they weren't... as unlikely as it might seem, there was no need to be antagonistic either. In fact, it would be wiser not to rub them the wrong way. Especially on a long trip through the Quegan.

Throwing a faintly amused expression at Myrnal for a split-second, she turned to the gentlemen as she tucked a stray dark curl behind one ear. "Good evening to you both. Don't mind my friend. She doesn't deal much with people unless they happen to be at the pointed end of her weapon. As for asinine and meaningless conversation, I think introductions are in order. I am Lyra," one delicate hand placed itself on her chest as she spoke, then moved smoothly towards her guardian, "And you already know Myrnal here..." her blue eyes appraised the men as she spoke, taking into account their stance and demeanor, her hands politely clasped themselves on her lap.

The human looked comfortable, although understandably reticent. The 'pointy-eared' one, as Myrnal would call him, seemed a little less at home.

"And you, sir," she regarded him kindly, "I hope I find you well. Better than you were at the tavern, at least."

********

Hatsumi sat still as the maidservant placed the finishing touches to her appearance. Her waist-length hair was braided and styled into an intricate bun at the back of her head, leaving the nape of her neck free. With light fingers, the woman placed a sprig of Sweet Brier Rose to finish it off. Finally done, Hatsumi stood up and looked at herself in the full-length mirror. The pale yellow furisode flowed over her shoulders and encased itself at her waist within an intricate obi.

"I don't look like myself," she commented after a while, after she entered her tutor's presence.

She looked like a dream, so perfectly put together, he thought as she walked toward him; hands politely placed in front, a fan within her clasp. Only twelve, and already so poised.

Sakamoto laughed heartily, "It is all a performance, my lady. You are your father's pride, therefore your actions in front of the minor envoys from the Winter Falls Clan must be perfect. This is a test to see if you can put all that I've taught you into practice."

The girl's features arranged themselves into a slight worry, "But I feel so awkward... how can my actions seem natural and fine? What if my words come out sounding fake?"

Gently, he placed a firm hand on her shoulder. Patting it lightly, as if concerned that he might shatter the illusion, Sakatomoto turned his pupil towards the door. "You are a courtier. Everything you do is an extension of yourself, even if it is forced - nothing is unnatural, nothing is foreign. This is all second nature to you."

"But..." she hesitated.

"No," Sakamoto cut in, "Calm down, Hatsumi-chan, and do not think about what to do - only do it."
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Re: The Burden of Sin
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2007, 08:34:53 PM »

"Good evening to you both. Don't mind my friend. She doesn't deal much with people unless they happen to be at the pointed end of her weapon. As for asinine and meaningless conversation, I think introductions are in order. I am Lyra,"

Altair was fairly amused, but mostly suspicious. He had seen these two, Demetri had pointed them out on the ship and the half-elf had been convinced that there was a reason he kept bumping into this particular one, this Lyra. The other one though, for some reason, dressed up inconspicuously like a boy. This disguise was meant to fool people, no doubt, but it could not fool Altair. He was someone whom was no stranger to disguise and an aspect of his profession clearly demanded him to be able to distinguish one person from another, no matter what he or she is wearing.

“Don't mind my friend. She doesn't deal much with people unless they happen to be at the pointed end of her weapon,”

Altair let out a small but acknowledging laugh to this particular comment.

“That’s something I can relate to,” he said, softly but clearly audible.

He sat back against the cushioned seat and watched them with interest, noticing how uncomfortable they felt, well, mostly Lyra, and he wondered why. Their paths obviously led to the same destination and she had been right in attempting to dispel the air of uncertainty as they embark on a perilous and long journey to Nijon.

A little conversation would not hurt and Altair, despite how the other three felt, was completely at ease for the first time in a long time.
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« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2007, 01:41:58 AM »

If asked if Demetri considered himself a dangerous individual he would say no. He was a simple mercenary trying to make his way through a cruel world. However, knowing himself, he knew within his heart that he was a dangerous adversary. He was not one to be underestimated, for if anyone ever made the mistake of assuming anything about him, they would soon find themselves not of the living.

However, these women made him nervous. His mother, Gods rest her well meaning soul, had told him never to believe in coincidences. Everything was connected in some way and there was a reason for the reasons that the four of them sat together. Something much more was happening, something that Demetri couldn’t possibly comprehend, however he felt that whatever would happen would alter his life for the times to come.

There was a long awkward silence that passed before the woman dressed as a man spoke. She was curt and to the point. Aspects that Demetri liked, except the rude part."So. Awkward silence. We going to sit here like weirdos or is someone going to make asinine and meaningless conversation?"

No conversation was meaningless or silly. Every conversation, each word spoken by a person acted as a flashlight into one’s mindset. The way they spoke or the manner in which they carried a conversation was all ways to identify mental or emotional characteristics.” I believe asinine and meaningless conversation is usually left for women.”

He didn’t mean anything negative towards women about it, but it would only bring some kind of reaction from the hooded woman. He needed to know their potential adversaries as well as he could.

Sparing the brief time to catch a glance of the one known as Lyra, he saw that she had fought the urge to laugh at the remark from her partner. She wasn’t a servant of Daidlin. Over the time that the hooded woman had been talking, it had become apparent that Lyra wasn’t any servant of any religion. Much more a clever ploy by the ones hunting him. A woman trained to get close before slicing their throat. It was far stretched, but Demetri would still keep his guard up to catch anything unusual. 

Then, Lyra spoke up,"Good evening to you both. Don't mind my friend. She doesn't deal much with people unless they happen to be at the pointed end of her weapon. As for asinine and meaningless conversation, I think introductions are in order. I am Lyra," one of Lyra’s petite hands moved to her chest and than motioned to her partner "And you already know Myrnal here..." Slowly, the hands returned to her lap, where Demetri wouldn’t have to worry about watching them all the time.

"And you, sir," she regarded him kindly, "I hope I find you well. Better than you were at the tavern, at least." Although Demetri was sure that Lyra was attempting to be kind, Demetri did not at all find it kind. She was implying things from the past and it would make the other two question how Lyra had come to know Demetri from the past. It would bring up unwanted questions from Altair.

“I am better.” He said, and kept it simple. He didn’t want the other two to know more than they had already learned.

“That’s something I can relate to,” Altair said beside him softly to Lyra’s statement. Demetri would have to out on a limb on his own and unearth the explanations upon why these two were going to Nijon. In this particular interest, he would take the cue from Myrnal and be blunt as possible about it.

“So, why are you two on your way to Nijon.”He was sure that they would tell lies, and it would only confirm his fears.
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« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2007, 11:24:21 AM »
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"I believe asinine and meaningless conversation is usually left for women."

Oh, so he's one of those, Myrnal thought. She mulled over his words while he answered Minshara, trying to keep her mouth shut about it. But really... Myrnal was often gruff with her friends. She had no reason to treat this jackass with kid gloves if he were going to make broad-reaching disrespectful statements about her sex.

Ordinarily, Myrnal herself preferred the casual company of guys to the company of women. There was something about sitting down and having a beer with her mercenary friends that going shopping with a girl didn't quite match. This did not mean, by any stretch of the imagination, that Myrnal thought men were better-suited for social contact with other people. To the contrary, Myrnal had had too many conversations with men about fishing, money, and ex-lovers to believe they were any more profound or expressive than women.

In fact, that very quality was what Myrnal appreciated. As long as emotional or, gods forbid, physical intimacy wasn't expected by either side, Myrnal was more comfortable with men. Other than her dearest friends, men as a rule didn't ask questions she'd have to answer with lies. The asinine and superficial quality of most conversations she had with strange men was comforting when it wasn't an annoyance.

Right now? It was an annoyance. Myrnal did idly wonder whether this guy even made comments like that to women he was trying to sleep with. She quickly dismissed the possibility due to a strong suspicion that if he did... he'd be speaking at least an octave or two higher by now.

By the time he asked them about their trip to Nijon, Myrnal had resolved to finally answer him.

"Y'know, friend," Myrnal began. "You're lucky I'm such a nice woman. A remark like that could get you in real trouble with someone less kind and generous than myself." She stretched out her arms, weaving her fingers together and cracking them before returning them to their position at the back of her neck.

"A remark like that to the wrong woman could entice her to abandon meaningless feminine attempts at conversation in favor of an overwhelming desire to knock your nuts into your nostrils."

She brought one hand forward again, enjoying Demetri's attempts to keep track of all movement from his potential enemies. She held one finger up for emphasis, as if calling the heavens themselves as her witness. "But! Despite what my companion might tell you, I have excellent social skills, and generally don't resort to violence until the second remark like that."

A lazy, lop-sided grin spread over her face, the casual kind that only her closest friends and hated foes learned to see for the warning sign it was. For everyone else, sometimes it was comforting, sometimes alarming... but it was always a lie. "First one is a freebie, because I'm so wonderfully giving. I'm veritably hemorrhaging generosity over here. Don't waste it by being an ass unless you want to be told to your face that's what you are."
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« Reply #19 on: February 10, 2007, 01:04:52 PM »

"I believe asinine and meaningless conversation is usually left for women."

A sharp red mist descended suddenly upon Min's vision, burning at her throat and her eyes like some sort of inflaming irritant. Calm down, she told herself. The remark could have been said simply to inflame. It had struck her as something that did not have a vehement force of belief behind it. Still, it was a rude thing to say.


"Y'know, friend," Myrnal began. "You're lucky I'm such a nice woman. A remark like that could get you in real trouble with someone less kind and generous than myself. A remark like that to the wrong woman could entice her to abandon meaningless feminine attempts at conversation in favor of an overwhelming desire to knock your nuts into your nostrils. But! Despite what my companion might tell you, I have excellent social skills, and generally don't resort to violence until the second remark like that.First one is a freebie, because I'm so wonderfully giving. I'm veritably hemorrhaging generosity over here. Don't waste it by being an ass unless you want to be told to your face that's what you are."


Minshara placed a hand on Myrnal's forearm, "Forget it, Myrnal. It's going to be a long journey... perhaps longer than we imagined." She spoke gently but firmly. "And this isn't worth the energy spent."

She turned her face towards the half-elf who had, up till a few moments ago, been given the better half of her assumption of his character. His curt reply to her asking of his health indicated that her inquiry was most unwelcomed. Instinctively, she dropped her voice and spoke at a slightly slower speed, her lyrical voice perfectly enunciating every syllable of the words that came forth next. "I am glad that you are so."

The blue eyes looked back into his own gray ones not without emotion, but rather with the assurance that while she would allow an unwarranted remark like that to pass, the next would not be so easily forgiven, even if it did stem from a petulant and bigoted ignorant individual. Still, she flashed a diplomat's unnerved persona; hands placed politely upon her lap as she moved her eye contact from the half-elf's companion and back.

There was paranoia and there was paranoid. And then there was just plain good old-fashioned, unthinking paranoia. The same word for three different levels of fears, all stemming from a mind unable to see the forest for the trees. Min resisted the urge to roll her eyes at the darting glances, not as subtly hidden as the half-elf would like to believe.

"I am Nijonese," she smiled, "That fact doesn't escape most people. I have been away from Nijon for almost a decade and thought it was time for me to return to my homeland. I have family and business to see to.  Myrnal is my retainer. It is her responsibility to keep me safe."

It amazed her how smoothly it came forth, without a hitch or a pause the length of a heartbeat. Technically, it wasn't a lie but the foreboding feeling unfurled within Minshara's gut told her that it was probably closer to the truth than she had ever thought possible.

*********


The meeting with the surly diplomats ended well. Lord Ito was well-pleased with his daughter's skill, demonstrating it by placing a hand on her shoulder and kissing her on the forehead when all the guests and family members had exited the front hall. Hatsumi was delighted but as always, kept it restrained and only bowed to acknowledge her father's gesture. As soon as he had left, she returned to her teacher, who was also not disappointed.

She smiled, "I think.. that I am ready." The blue eyes beamed unadulterated joy at the test she had just passed.

"You have chosen your patron deity?" her sensei asked.

Hatsumi nodded, "I choose the God of Dreams, master. I owe it to him, for everything that he has given me."

Sakamoto nodded and opened up his set of needles and vials of black ink carefully. "A good choice... potentially dangerous, but good," he replied, motioning for her to turn around. "I had expected Aldaron," he said, preparing to sketch the design. "But you have always surprised me."

Hatsumi carefully turned and undid the knot that held her robe together. Pulling it open till it went past her shoulders, she held the robe closed at her chest and waited for the first pin prick. It came, and was followed by many others... the small dots connected by the lazy human vision as one picture. At first the lines, like clouds spread across her back and shoulderblades, then came the breeze... and when it was done, the eyes of Daidlin, in the shape of a fox's came into being upon the god's newest servant.


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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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« Reply #20 on: February 11, 2007, 09:14:12 AM »

Altair raised a questioning eyebrow when Demetri made that particular comment which he considered pointless and sexist, even if Demetri did suspect them to be in league with his pursuers.

The one called Myrnal had gone off on him, in a vehement display of diatribe which could make any man wince and regret his words.

He was going to speak up, to calm the proverbial storm when the smaller one, Lyra whom he considered to be quietly beautiful in her own right, spoke up, defusing the volatile situation with a few carefully placed words.

Altair sighed, as Lyra explained her reasons for heading towards Nijon and decided that as long as this trip was going to be, it would be even longer if the air of silence settled and the window of opportunity passed by forever.

Softly but clearly, Altair said, “I have heard about your country Miss Lyra and I go to it now, to see it with my own eyes. I have seen many things, marvelous cities and Nijon is one place I have yet to step foot in,”

A lie, not terribly good but it sufficed. It was simple without contradictions and Altair didn’t require anymore prodding into his businesses there. At the very least, he’d appear like a tourist and with any luck, might enlist this Lyra, without her consciously knowing, to aid him in his search for Talia Raven.

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« Reply #21 on: February 12, 2007, 05:35:34 PM »

You and me both, remarked her mind privately but Min only added, "It is a unique place, despite its...reputation."

Myrnal and the other passenger had been quiet as she and the man exchanged anonymous pleasantries. It occured to her that they still didn't know their names. It didn't help that they had 'secret business' stamped all over themselves in their leather and blades get up. Maybe they just liked being called 'Sir' (in Myrnal's case, friend) by women they hardly knew.

"I might be a little forward," she pressed, choosing to ignore what other answers that might come forth. "Perhaps you would be so kind as to allow us a name we can refer to you by. Honestly, it's slightly odd referring to you mentally as 'the human male' and 'the half-elf'." Then with a playful smile, "It doesn't even have to be real. Just allow us a point of reference."

But at least the impending verbal debacle had been diffused as the subject matter changed. Min yawned, her body had slipped back into the familiar steadiness of concrete ground, finally allowed the fatigue to sink in. Covering her mouth with one hand, she leaned against her seat, throwing her gaze outside as the carriage seemed to sink into another quiet, but thankfully so much less awkward, moment as she waited for a reply.
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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« Reply #22 on: February 14, 2007, 07:16:15 PM »

As a child, Demetri had been raised only by his mother, and under the constant care of his mother, he had learned to appreciate and respect women, usually more so than he did men. He was not himself, of course. For one thing, he had not taken the herbs provided by Lyra, so during the night he had been plagued by memories of the fateful night of leaving his mother to her death or imprisonment and even more dreams of her crawling from the ground and covered with maggots. He was extremely irritable when he did not have his sleep inducing medicine.

All meaningless conversation was useless. Always. When there was no need for words than words should not be spoken. People should speak only when they had something important to say. His mother had always told him that he had one mouth, and two ears; listen twice as much as you speak. To speak when there was not any point in speaking was being foolish and it was a waste of breath.

If he enjoyed these women’s company, he would have treated them with more respect. He was being paranoid, but he had every right to be paranoid. Both of them were full of lies and he wouldn’t doubt it if they’re mission to Nijon was not a benevolent one as Lyra stated that it was.

"Y'know, friend," The boyish woman began. "You're lucky I'm such a nice woman. A remark like that could get you in real trouble with someone less kind and generous than myself." Demetri almost laughed at hearing that, only a small smirk coming to his face as he watched her crack her knuckles. If that was her attempt at being intimidating, than someone was doing a horrible job."A remark like that to the wrong woman could entice her to abandon meaningless feminine attempts at conversation in favor of an overwhelming desire to knock your nuts into your nostrils."

Threats got nowhere with Demetri, and the same silent coldness was the only in-verbal remark that could be seen coming from him. "But! Despite what my companion might tell you, I have excellent social skills, and generally don't resort to violence until the second remark like that." He was wondering if he should come up with another insult just so that he could kill them and have no more worries, but before he could say anything, Myrnal continued."First one is a freebie, because I'm so wonderfully giving. I'm veritably hemorrhaging generosity over here. Don't waste it by being an ass unless you want to be told to your face that's what you are."

In all fairness, Demetri believed that the Myrnal was putting up a large fair of breath on him. He had already started to ignore her; she said nothing important enough except useless threats.

Lyra placed a hand on Myrnal's forearm, "Forget it, Myrnal. It's going to be a long journey... perhaps longer than we imagined." She spoke gently but firmly. "And this isn't worth the energy spent." At least Lyra had some common sense. He wasn’t at all in the mood for a fight, however who was ever in the mood to fight except lunatics and fools?

"I am glad that you are so." The woman could control himself, he would give her that, but behind those blue eyes, he knew. He looked away from her and to the outside. He had had enough of useless chit chat for now. Perhaps when they said something interesting or another threat, would he give them attention; whether his reaction would be hostile or genial.

"I am Nijonese," she smiled, "That fact doesn't escape most people. I have been away from Nijon for almost a decade and thought it was time for me to return to my homeland. I have family and business to see to.  Myrnal is my retainer. It is her responsibility to keep me safe." He had seen Nijonese before in his time at Narim, however the ones he had seen were usually men and a little rougher than the delicate woman before him. It had been a mistake to overlook that fact. Although, it felt wrong, what she said. Something that Demetri could not quite place at first.

Softly but clearly, Altair said, “I have heard about your country Miss Lyra and I go to it now, to see it with my own eyes. I have seen many things, marvelous cities and Nijon is one place I have yet to step foot in,” Demetri knew that that remark was a lie. Some places were better left unseen and Demetri had a feeling that Altair’s reason for going to Nijon was a little darker.

And as Lyra and Altair exchanged conversation, Demetri drifted into his own memories. Of Narim, of his original home, of what it would be like to go back. He wanted to try to find his mother, but instead he always found himself being pulled in the wrong direction. Maybe it was high time he put a foot down and take charge of his life.

Lyra pulled him from his thoughts, and wearily, Demetri looked over to her,"Perhaps you would be so kind as to allow us a name we can refer to you by. Honestly, it's slightly odd referring to you mentally as 'the human male' and 'the half-elf'." Then with a playful smile, "It doesn't even have to be real. Just allow us a point of reference." She yawned, and after a moment of silence, Demetri spoke.

“Demetri Ferrinex.” Simply put and simply executed. No hint of hostility or anger behind his voice.
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« Reply #23 on: February 15, 2007, 02:03:56 PM »
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It was nice not having to talk.

For some reason, the gods had often cursed Myrnal with travelling companions who seemed completely incapable of conversing without her prodding, and Myrnal found the idea of being the center of polite company more than a little horrifying. She wasn't qualified for that kind of sneaking.

However, Minshara seemed to be doing just fine. She and the calmer of the two men seemed to be getting along all right, and Myrnal had done her job with Demetri. The sullen young man had been driven back onto his heels and out of the conversation for now. Rather than continuing to chat after being shoved back on the defensive, he chose to stare out the window, speaking only when spoken to directly.

Good. Jackass. Let him have a good long sulk. Myrnal saw it as a good sign. She doubted she'd have been able to get such a petty and resentful reaction from him if he were a polished, well-trained assassin sent to take out Minshara or herself. She knew plenty of mercenaries, and the ones who worried her were never prone to sulking. They were friendly, they were jovial. They got to know their target and got close before eventually striking.

Myrnal strongly doubted this Demetri was capable of such subtlety. Maybe on the battlefield he could handle himself with dignity and composure, but in the brief struggle for conversational dominance Demetri had clearly been eaten alive by a petite Nijonese healer.

Eh. Keep an eye on the one with manners, then. I don't mind him so much, which is either a very good sign or a very bad one. Demetri? Well...

It seemed to Myrnal that if these men were enemies, the quiet and courteous one was, if anything, likely the brains of the operation. He was controlled, and he was composed. She pitied him briefly for his sad fate, for being the one cursed to be holding Demetri's leash.

She wondered briefly if her relationship with Minshara seemed that way to them. She smiled inwardly at the thought. It was probably best, though. For one thing, it was largely true. Myrnal went where Min went and for now Min's priorities were hers. Perhaps more importantly it created a professional distance between physician and guardian that was more than a little comforting. If that was all it was, that's all it had to be.

Myrnal cautioned herself mentally against writing this job off as nothing more than what it seemed, though. Her talent for careful repression had come back to bite her in the ass at least once. She'd once travelled with a man who slipped entirely beneath her notice, who had started off as a mild annoyance and eventually become more important to her than her own life. To top it all off, she hadn't even realized it until he'd left to live or die on a mission he felt was his alone.

She would have to be careful. Myrnal was not a heartless or cruel woman by any measure. She wasn't cold. She wasn't hateful or resentful. Most of all she was not the kind of woman who relished a life alone, lurking in the shadows. She appreciated company and the comfort that came with understanding and acceptance. It had simply seldom been safe to accept those things into her life, even though they might do her a world of good.

For Min's safety and her own, the job came first, friendship second. If that left Minshara "holding her leash" then so be it. If it wasn't the truth, with careful vigilance and a little willpower, Myrnal hoped that it would be.
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« Reply #24 on: February 15, 2007, 11:37:35 PM »

Altair paused as Lyra asked for his name. She had clearly stated that it didn’t matter if the name he offered was false which led him to wonder if her name was indeed Lyra and not something else. And if it was merely a moniker she chose, it was fairly obvious that her purpose in Nijon were far more symbolical than what she declared.

Still, it mattered little to Altair. He shall call her by whatever name she chooses for herself and the same went for her retainer, the sharp tongued female named Myrnal. Occasional he caught her staring daggers at Demetri but that may just be imagination on his part. The lithe young woman was no doubt a capable warrior, judging from the way she spoke and carried herself.

The air was thick with uncertainty and both women eyed them with suspicion and caution while Demetri did the same. Whatever their reasons were, it must be substantial enough to rally their paranoia. Yet, Altair knew that if faced in a similar situation, where the person in front of him was a potential enemy, his every action would be forced and not this casual.

If the women did turn out to be spies or assassins, they will be dealt with quickly, but at the moment, neither presented a palpable threat which begged for attention. Subtlety was the key here and Altair was more than comfortable being in this position.

A thousand names flooded his mind and he waded through each one, attempting to locate something suitable to give to Lyra.

Angelus, Christian, Erik, Dante…

“Altair,” he said, “My name is Altair and it is a pleasure to meet you, Miss Lyra, and your retainer as well,”

No matter how he tried, he can never be called by another name. His name bore the significance his mother accorded him and everyday he bears that name, he honors her memory and that is something Altair, can never relinquish.

The journey was smooth, albeit for a few rough moments. Soon, they will enter the Quegan jungle and the dense foliage will sprawl about them. He knew the dangers of the Quegan, of the many races that now make this unconquerable land their home.

Orcs and goblins and Spiders and more often than not, something in between.

“I do hope the both of you can fight,” Altair said, “We will be entering the Quegan soon enough and I doubt we will have a pleasant journey throughout. Orcs and Goblins litter every nook and cranny and it is best we are on our guard at all times,”




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« Reply #25 on: February 16, 2007, 04:36:24 AM »

(OOC: I've moved the thread here, with the last three posts carried over.)
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