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« Reply #30 on: January 03, 2007, 10:37:53 AM »

She could use the silver, Min decided. She'll need it for food and boarding and with a grimace, Min thought of the amount of telling off Safiya would give her if she dared to send a young lady on her way at this time of the night.

"I'm pretty sure," she replied thinking of her adoptive mother, slipping the kaiken under her shirt again. "I don't sleep much and there's nothing worth stealing. You need the rest anyway so I'm going to leave you to it and see you in the morning..."

if you haven't mysteriously disappeared into thin air by then, she added mentally.

Picking up her cat, she bade Myrnal goodnight and climbed up to sit on the porch roof, watching the constellations till sunrise. "Guess it's just you, me and the stars again tonight, Socks."
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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Re: The Burden of Sin
« Reply #31 on: January 03, 2007, 11:23:38 AM »
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Myrnal stood next to her pile of weapons and her black overcoat as she watched the healer head off with her cat.

Aren't we going to be a pair, she thought. Seeing that Min apparently intended to spend her time out front, Myrnal went to check out the back of the house. It wasn't that she distrusted Min. After all, Myrnal herself was likely the most suspicious person in the area.

Briefly Myrnal missed working in groups. It didn't happen often, but watch shifts meant that everyone got to sleep at least. The choice for the moment was sleeping now and risking something happening at this early stage, or staying up all night and being compromised until she got some real rest.

Well, there'll most definitely be trouble later, but it's only highly likely that there'll be trouble now. Best compromise is probably to sleep while it's only extremely stupid to do so, rather than when it would be unforgiveably stupid.

Myrnal crossed her arms over her waist, covering the blades at her belt. She did a brief check. The opening on her pack was protected by the weight of her leaning on it, her arms were over her blades, she had the entrance to the house covered, lot of good it would do her though, since the yard was fairly open. The trees in the center of the garden blocked her view of the other side, so anyone who wanted to bother them would gain an advantage by coming around that way.

All in all the situation sucked and there was nothing she could do about it. This was her conclusion.

She sat down in front of the back door and spread her coat over her legs as a blanket, leaning back on her pack and laying a foot out in front of her against the door itself. At least that way anyone trying to get into the house would have to nudge some part of her aside. Let them try that without waking her up. Whoever "they" were. It didn't matter. If Minshara were attacked by a stampeding herd of giant bloodthirsty pillaging rabbits, it would still be Myrnal's job to protect her.

Myrnal hoped it would be something normal after Min as she leaned against the side of the house and began to drift off to sleep. She wasn't getting paid enough for the rabbits.
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« Reply #32 on: January 03, 2007, 11:38:33 AM »

The porch roof was a nice place to take a nap once she had gotten used to it. Sleepily, she stretched and yawned. Looking for Socks but finding him nowhere, she woke up to the sight of Safiya walking down to her shack.

"Mother," she called. "What are you doing here?"

"I do live across the fields from you," the old woman replied. "What are you doing sleeping on the roof... again?"

Min climbed down, realising it was rather rude to talk to her shouting from the top. Not to mention, half the village could hear, let alone Myrnal who might be sleeping. "I had a patient last night. Some girl came in with a flesh wound. She's inside if you want to ask her to come around to join you and father for breakfast."

"I wouldn't mind another one at the table," Safiya replied opening the door.

"I thought as much,"  Min agreed, coming up behind her. "You could give my portion to her. I'm not hungry and I told Sarai I'd give her the day off today and take over her rounds."

"For the money."

Min nodded.

"Just as well, then," Safiya went on then paused abruptly. "I thought sleeping everywhere but the bed was a Nijonese eccentricity?" the dark-skinned local pointed to the sleeping mercenary... blissfully tucked away next to the backdoor.

"I'll wake her," Min answered, rubbing her temples. "Myrnal... wake up. Mother.. this is Myrnal. Myrnal, this is my mother... Safiya," she quickly inroduced the pair. "She wants you to join her for breakfast before you leave."
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« Reply #33 on: January 04, 2007, 09:31:24 AM »

The inviting lights of Tarsis’ fishermen’s docks shone bright in the night, a beacon of sorts to weary men returning home after a hard night’s work. In his heart, Altair could feel the anticipation of success. When he closed his eyes, he could imagine Markus Draco’s face, twisted in fear and pain as he divulged the secrets of Talia’s exile to him, his blade pressed firmly against the aged throat.

He savored it for a moment, then put it out of his mind. Such thoughts, while entertaining, did him no good. They merely distracted him from reality and if he intends to find what he seeks, reality is something he needs to plant his feet firmly into.

Demetri rowed the boat into the holding area and the guard on duty, an elderly man with a thin wispy beard and a hair of ivory upon his head tied the noose around the pole. Quietly, Demetri disembarked, leading his horse with him, up the short flight of granite stairs.

Altair noticed a twinge of puzzlement cross the old man’s eye and as he stepped past him, he heard the old man say out loud;

“Say, isn’t that Jerad’s boat?”

Altair lingered for a split second, then continued, but this time the man called out to him.

“Who are you? What have you done with Jerad? I’m going to call the guards!”

As that word escaped his leathery lips, Altair had stepped back immediately and held him firmly by the neck, his eyes boring holes into the man. He yelped and attempted to wiggle his way out but to no avail.

“If you value your life, you will listen to me,” Altair said, staring straight at him, “You have two options in front of you. First one, you go for help and I slit your throat, your body shall be dumped into this ocean and you will rot at the bottom for all eternity. No one will ever know what happened to you,”

Fear rose quickly in the man’s eyes and the tears welled up.

“Option two is a lot simpler. I release you and you pretend you never saw us. You are free to take this boat and return it to the owner but with no mention of us,”

Altair released the old man suddenly, causing him to fall to the ground, coughing and clutching at his bruised throat.

“What will it be?”

He watched the old man, unflinching. The latter moved slowly, his limbs shaking in fear. Silently, he picked up his staff and returned to his position, staring out into the night, his lantern by his side.
Smiling softly to himself, Altair fished into his belt and took out three gold coins to which he left atop the pedestal next to the man. In truth, he wished he hadn’t done what he did. The fool was merely doing his job, but Altair had no choice. If he appeared manipulating and insincere at the start, he might have gotten into more trouble. Thus, he reacted in the only surest way he knew how to.

The old man saw the glint of gold from the corner of his eyes but dared not turn to look at Altair.

“Three gold pieces for you time old man. Enough to buy you food for a month. Enough to get you medicine for that throat,”

With that said, Altair walked up the stairs to the waiting Demetri.

Being on a different ground from Míriel was interesting to say the least and Tarsis wasn’t that far removed from his home city.

A new dawn awaited him and with it, comes the promise of many new things and hopefully the splendor of old as well.
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Re: The Burden of Sin
« Reply #34 on: January 04, 2007, 09:51:11 AM »
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The men that had been chasing her caught up to Danis easily. The man who held Danis was dressed in what must have been a tan outfit, but it was so stained with blood and dirt it was barely recognizable as clothing. The blood rubbed off on Danis as he kicked and tried to escape. The traveler dropped his pack and held Danis with both arms.

“Stay still, you little monsters. I hate children,” said the man holding the little girl. “Do we really need them for anything?”

The other man grinned and pulled out a large hunting knife. “I don’t suppose we do.”


Myrnal jolted awake at the sudden sound of a human voice. Her hand flew to the knives at her belt and she'd drawn a katar without even thinking. After one shaky breath her eyes cleared and she realized it was just Minshara and someone who was... apparently her mother. Myrnal shoved the dagger back in her belt and rubbed the back of her neck, a little embarassed.

"Sorry about that," she sighed. "Scared the s#&^ out of me when you woke me up." Myrnal clapped a hand over her mouth. "Oh. Sorry again. Just kind of slips out sometimes."

Language, language. Been too long since you visited Yanna and Kerran. Don't have your filthy mouth suppressed as well as you should anymore, do you? Your old-people censorship is a little rusty.

Myrnal stood and braced herself against the house with one hand. She twisted her torso and cracked her back in at least half a dozen places.

My own fault, she thought. S'what I get for sleeping on the ground.

"So are you guys all right? Minshara, you sleep okay? Apparently we both picked pretty freaky places to hang out last night. Did anyone even take the bed?"
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« Reply #35 on: January 04, 2007, 10:14:41 AM »

"Well, maybe my cat at one point," Minshara replied. "Which reminds me... where is he?"

She looked to Safiya. "I didn't see him when I came up by the side."

Min paused. She was probably just paranoid. After all, she was seemingly wrong about Myrnal. "I'm sure he'll turn up," she smiled. "So... I'm going to get the list from Sarai and Mother can send you back on your way. It was nice meeting you, Myrnal."

Minshara turned and exited through the back. She liked leaving her home by walking through the garden, checking on her plants as she did so. Yet, there was something odd about the garden today. A slight buzzing sound, that came from the centre of the trees, caught her attention. "Mother?"

"Yes?"

"Did you put extra fertilizer on the fruit trees again?"

"Not since the last time you told me not to."

Min walked over tentatively to the grove. A feeling of horror and sorrow overcame her as the image sharpened upon her sight.

Again, there was the familiar coppery smell as the breeze passed by her. The soil was darker than it should have been... and Socks...

"Oh, Socks..." Min cried, picking up the limp, unmoving body of her friend. He suddenly seemed a lot smaller than he normally was. The eyes were closed and Min stiffled an overwhelming feeling of nausea as she realised that the throat was cut cleanly through. Keep calm, she told herself but was unsure if any form of sound escaped her lips. Her ears registered a small muffled cry that coincided with the pain in her throat. At least, it was a fast death, she could tell... the knife was sharp and the cut, slightly deeper than it needed to be.

Minshara heard her mother come up behind her, the slow shuffled steps of the old woman gave her enough time to tilt the cat's head downwards; hiding the injury. She held Socks to her chest, cuddling the frame that suddenly seemed so small. "Its Socks," she mustered, still kneeling in the ground that was fast soaking the knees of her pants red. "Someone slit his throat."

"Oh, Gods..."

Minshara trembled, "That's not all..." She held up a torn piece of paper. "They left this behind. I found it... under the... neck."

It was a part of the map on her table... specifically, the part labelled 'Nijon'.
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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« Reply #36 on: January 04, 2007, 10:34:06 AM »
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Myrnal watched Min as she explored her garden for the source of the unfamiliar noise. She didn't see the cat until Minshara pulled him out of the grove of trees, and when it was clear what had happened, Myrnal pulled in air in an anxious hiss.

It's going to get worse, and if it's starting already, it's going to get worse fast.

Myrnal took a few cautious steps toward the healer and her adoptive mother, glancing over her shoulder to see what had been found with the cat. "Minshara..." Myrnal began, her tone tense and guarded. "Please tell me you can fight. At least a little."

If they've gotten into the house, it wasn't through the back. They must have gone around the front and gotten hold of the cat and whatever bit of map that was, and then laid him out here. Probably to make sure there's someone handy to take the fall. F$%#ing wonderful. Someone like the blade-collecting mercenary who showed up in the night. But it doesn't matter. If that were Heinrich, I don't think there'd be any convincing me either. I'd want a piece of somebody.

"This is a sign of Serious Bad S#&^ in the very near future. Are you going to be all right?"
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« Reply #37 on: January 04, 2007, 10:53:22 AM »

Minshara wasn't in the mood to reply anything. Safiya reached out toward her but her daughter pulled away. Worriedly, she looked to Myrnal.

Slowly, Min stood up. Her eyes were clear and while not glassy with tears, they were fast reddenning from another emotion that was vastly different from sorrow. "I'm going to find out who did this..." she said, speaking to no one in particular. "And I'm going to start with her."

"Who?" Safiya couldn't help asking.

"Papilonn," she hissed. "She's the one who told me not to go."

Saifya wrung her hands. She had not often seen her daughter so emotionally affected. "It is unlikely that she will do this, child."

"She might not have done it," Min paused, acknowledging that cat killing was not the subtlety Papilonn so often employed. "But she might know who did."
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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« Reply #38 on: January 04, 2007, 11:04:44 AM »
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At least she didn't point the finger at me! That's something at least.

Myrnal frowned. There was no reason to keep Minshara from going to Papilonn. Any attempt to do it would be obviously contrived and would just make no damned sense in general. Best thing to do would be to accompany her like a worried friend.

"Look, I don't know anything about professional cat assassination, but the idea of walking around by yourself making accusations to whoever the hell you find seems profoundly freaking stupid to me. You still haven't answered my question and I doubt I'd be content with your answer if you did."

Myrnal reached up and rubbed her eyelids with her fingertips. She hated going without breakfast. Her mother may have been a partial or even total nutcase, but she'd always insisted on breakfast and Myrnal saw nothing wrong with that. The ninja reached down and grabbed her coat, slipping her arms through the sleeves. She reached down and pulled her pack from the ground where it lay, half-squashed after being slept on like an insect crushed underfoot.

"I hate to be the kind of pushy broad who always annoys the hell out of me, but I don't like the idea of you wandering around alone, and I'm not going to let you do it. Keep your private business to yourself if you want, but I'm not letting you run off and get yourself killed by ruthless cat murderers over it."
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« Reply #39 on: January 04, 2007, 08:04:32 PM »

It certainly had been a hard days work for Demetri. Rowing a boat all the way from Miriel to Tarsis wasn't exactly the easiest thing to undergo, although Demetri wasn't complaining about the sweat that touched his brow. He was accustomed to hard work and for once he was feeling free of the mercenaries. He wondered what would become of Altair and he, they worked well together and Altair appeared to be totally trustable in a tough situation. Demetri was starting to dread when they would depart. The mercenaries would come in larger numbers next time and he wouldn't be so lucky.

Focusing on the task at hand, Demetri rowed the boat into the holding area, momentarily catching the eye of the old man with the funny beard and white hair. Tarsis didn't seem to mind late visits. Demetri was already liking the place. Coming to a stop, he and his horse got out of the boat and came up a short flight of stone stairs turning around slowly to hear slightly heightened voices of that of the guard and Altair. Demetri's hand wondered to his long knife at his side, but at the moment he kept it sheathed. Altair could deal with it, for the moment.

Say, isn’t that Jerad’s boat?”The voice of a man who had appeared to have seen everything in life. Apparently, the old guard. His next comment was that of accusation,“Who are you? What have you done with Jerad? I’m going to call the guards!”

There was a yelp and then gurgle, and Demetri only shook his head. Altair was quick to strike, an admirable trait,“If you value your life, you will listen to me. You have two options in front of you. First one, you go for help and I slit your throat, your body shall be dumped into this ocean and you will rot at the bottom for all eternity. No one will ever know what happened to you,”

There was a moment of silence, and Demetri was beginning to wonder if Altair had already killed the man without waiting for which option for the man to take,“Option two is a lot simpler. I release you and you pretend you never saw us. You are free to take this boat and return it to the owner but with no mention of us,”

There was a sound of the man falling to the ground.

“What will it be?”

Than, he saw the glow of the lantern moving away and the man had chosen life and not his morals. Good decision. So the man was wiser than he had first appeared.“Three gold pieces for you time old man. Enough to buy you food for a month. Enough to get you medicine for that throat,” And now Altair paid the man for his silence.

Altair came up the stairs and Demetri remarked only once,"Subtle."Altair's way of silencing people worked for him. Whatever worked, worked. Demetri turned around and led them off the stairs and into the outside. Altair had come here for a reason, and Demetri was betting that the reason for him coming here was not for vacation.
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« Reply #40 on: January 04, 2007, 10:15:26 PM »

Min's eyes narrowed into sharp slits when the term 'probably freaking stupid' hit her hearing. "First," Min's voice came out in smooth controlled tones, almost reminscent of Papilonn's own. "To answer your question, no I can't fight. I can't remember how to at will, to be precise, which amounts to the same thing." Normally, she would react almost instaneously to what she considered a 'profoundly freaking' rude thing to say, quoting Myrnal's vernacular but there were more important things to settle and an uncouth stranger was the least of her worries.

Her thinking compartmentalised itself into so many sections, each one assessing and planning what her next moves were. She did not have time to hate herself for being efficient and cold-hearted. Minshara long realised that this was simply how she dealt with unfortunate circumstances - solve first, mourn later.

She laid the cat almostly lovingly on the ground and walked over to the garden tools that were laid in corner. The lithe fingers wrapped themselves tightly around the handle of the spade, the knuckles blanched white with effort. Slowly, the other two watched as Min buried her pet in the middle of the trees and bowed her head for a few seconds as she offered a prayer to Faelyn. She kindled a small fire over the grave, plucked a sprig of mistletoe, burnt it and clasped her hands. Only inaudible whispers left her lips.

"Second," Minshara continued, still controlling herself. "There is business between Papilonn and I, that you're not privy to. The cat was a warning - that is what she will say." Then added, almost in an unwary whisper. "I've seen this before..."

"Where?"

"In Nijon, I think... its very vague," the reply was rather dismissive.

"Someone doesn't want you to return to Nijon," Safiya concluded.

"I don't need a map fragment to tell me that," Min hoped she kept enough of the 'snap' out of the subtle intonations of her speech. "First, it will be my pet... then they will go after my family." The last word slipped heavily off her tongue.

"What?"

Minshara looked to Myrnal. "I don't need you to look after me. This is broad daylight and they've given warnings which will give me a few days grace to cancel whatever plans I have." At this point, she looked around the small shack and in the distance, where thankfully, Min saw the age-humbled Ikwame stepping out of his home. "Its them, I'm worried about - my parents."

She walked to her shack and changed, slipping on a clean pair of pants. Min moved fast. In a matter of minutes, she was ready to leave and attend to whatever business she figured she had to settle. She tucked the kaiken into the folds of her shirt, adjusting the position so that the cloth hid it well, all the time her eyes showed that her mind was constantly thinking of matters other than what her hands and feet were doing. Shifting her back to get used to the weight of her knapsack, she walked back to the two women.

"My trip to Nijon will have to be put off for now," she stated, adjusting the straps. "I'll head over to the bordello after I'm done with my rounds. You need rest, Myrnal and keep the silver, just stay with my parents for the day. I might stand a chance against whatever attack, they won't. I'll be back in the evening."

Min leaned over to give Safiya a hug. "You will be all right," Min reassured the frightened old woman. "I will make sure of it."

"What about you? Are you really going to cancel your trip for now?"

Min nodded, her features relaxed into a slight expression of worry. "I won't be leaving for Narim as planned," she explained. "I'll see you later, Mother."

She strode over, feet firmly planted into the ground as she moved, toward her father and the two watched as she gave him a hug. Ikwame kissed her on the forehead as if in comfort before watching as she headed down the dirt road, fast disappearing from their sights.
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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« Reply #41 on: January 04, 2007, 10:34:31 PM »
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Myrnal sighed heavily and sat down on the front porch as Minshara left.

In Min's position, she'd have been nearly as worried about Yanna and Kerran. Kerran had been in the guard when he was younger, but that was a long time ago. The Shalienzas had taken her in and been family to her for ten years and damned if she would ever have left them to fend for themselves. She couldn't blame Minshara for feeling the same way.

The ninja put her head in her hands. she had to trust that Min was right and she'd have some time yet before the situation finally dropped.

"The difference between the ninja and the samurai," Myrnal's master had told her, "is a conflict between warriors who are obsessed with rules and people who guard their own individuality with their lives. Unfortunately for those of us who walk our own path, the rules won out."

"Sounds like a wonderful country," she'd quipped.

"It is, do not mistake me. But it is not for you, nor for me. Some people need the freedom to choose for themselves, and that is more important than anything else."


It was a choice between fulfilling the obligations of her job-- protecting the physician-- and fulfilling her obligations to herself and a couple of well-meaning elderly strangers. Screw the job. Minshara had proven her judgment to be sound enough so far, and Myrnal was not about to leave the next likely targets on their own.

She lifted her head and looked over to Safiya. "Listen, Safiya, is it?" The ninja stood. "I'm going to hang out here for a while, I guess. If anything happens, I want you to get the hell out of here." She frowned. If they couldn't fight, the only option would be for her to buy time while they got away. Her tone darkened to match the scowl on her face. "You seem like decent enough people to me, and if someone makes trouble I don't want you around to see what I do to them."

If she's gone too long, I'll go use the money Papilonn gave me and hire someone I trust to have them keep an eye on things here while I go find that crazy girl myself. I don't like sitting here and doing security work, but I'll respect her wishes for now.
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« Reply #42 on: January 04, 2007, 11:10:31 PM »

"I'd like a bed for the night, please," requested the young woman in a hood.

The flophouse owner didn't bother looking at her face. Customers like these didn't want to be known. "3 coppers," he replied gruffly. "And you can take the bed in the corner."

"Thank you," she replied as if travel-weary.

The grimy fat man felt a little guilty, watching the lady slip the knapsack from under her cloak and sit down on the stretched leather frame, using her own bag as a pillow. "There is a decent tavern not far from here, miss," he called out, ignoring the curses that the other sleeping customers of the flophouse mumbled angrily. "My cousin runs it. I'm sure I'll be able to get the price slashed if I talk to him."

The lady nodded, in what he liked to think was a smile. "That's very nice of you but it won't be neccessary."

"All right," he answered. "If you need anything..." then just stopped there, getting the impression that the lady wanted some privacy. "Goodnight,"

"Goodnight," she replied and simply laid down on the bed.

Minshara had heard of the tavern. She had paid a the bartender a silver too, for a night's stay that she didn't use. She had been right about Papilonn. The brothel madam told her what Min already figured she would answer. Socks was a warning. It would be best to stop her plans.

The smell of the flophouse invaded her with every breath. Another  guest, a man, sat down on the bed next to hers, clearly rubbing his throat in the candlelight. "You don't happen to have some water, do you, miss?" he asked in a raspy voice. "My throat hurts."

Min handed him her waterskin. "What happened?" she asked instinctively and then flinched, chiding herself for slipping into old rhythms.

"Some men assaulted me last night," he said, returning it and pulled his collar down. "They stole my friend's boat from Miriel and snuck into Tarsis. One of them put a knife to my throat too... damned sharp blade, it was. Bast... he threatened to gut me like a fish."

She held up a small candle, barely enough light to see. "Let me take a look," she said. "I know a little about medicine..." she explained to ease the watchman's worry. "Just a few bruises, you will be fine in a few days. Stole into Tarsis, you say? Last night?"

"Aye," he nodded, settling into his frame. "Just before dawn... near the rear-end of Poliho."

"You didn't happen to see how they looked like, did you?"

"Why?"

Min smiled. "I'm a... bard," she replied showing him her reed flute. "Or at least, I want to be one...I like hearing stories. I need some original material to work on when I get to Daidlin's temple in Elenion," she added, quoting one of the pamphlets the travel agent gave her.

"I can't tell you much, I'm afraid. Well, it was rather dark... and he, the one that put the knife to my throat, was quite large and... mean. I can't remember the other one... but they had a horse. It was real beauty too. A palomino or white... I think," he laughed painfully.

"Sounds like your regular pair of ruffians."

"Far from it," he coughed. "Gave me three gold pieces for my silence,"

Minshara laughed softly. "And you spend it here?" She blew out the candle and decided to try to get some sleep.

"Well, I'm an old man... had my share of women, wife died years ago. I thought I deserved a nice drink of them vintage ale. I'm sorry, miss... not quite the story you hoped for."

Min shrugged and smiled the smile that was fast becoming a charateristic feature of hers. "Oh not at all... its enough for an idea and I think I can figure things out."

*******

Back in Poliho, Safiya set the plates nervously for dinner. The girl, Myrnal, had stayed with them the whole day... but there was no sign of Minshara yet.

"It's getting rather late," she said, scooping rice.

"For?" Ikwame asked.

"Minshara..." Safiya answered her husband, surprised.

"Min? But why? It's not as she'll be back by nightfall."

"Why's that?" the voice was halting and unsure of what her husband's answer would be.

Ikwame looked to his guest and wife. "Minshara said her goodbyes this morning," he said increduously, "She's left for Nijon! Took the the last ship out."
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A story can have only one true ending. Even as the stranger felt compelled to commit her final words to paper she did it knowing they must never be read. To see the sum of her work was to see inside her own emptiness the heart of a destroyer not a creator. And yet, reflected back upon her at last she could see her own ending. And in this final act of destruction a chance to give what she could not receive.
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"Minshara said her goodbyes this morning. You didn't know... She's left for Narim already."

Myrnal was out of her chair and by her pack almost before Ikwame finished his sentence. She'd been wondering about this all day and trying to figure out what she would do if Minshara didn't come back. Even so, her mind was racing.

It wasn't that she didn't understand Minshara's feelings, but that woman was going to get herself killed. This kind of brash and near-suicidal plan was something Myrnal could not accept from anyone else.

"I'm sorry, Safiya. I won't be able to eat with you. I'm going to go find your daughter." She pulled on her coat and slung her backpack over her shoulder. "You can't be left here by yourself, so here's what I'm going to do. I will not tolerate any argument about this. I'm going into town anyway, so I'm going to find a friend of mine. I'd trust her with my life but more importantly, I trust her with yours. I'll have her stay with you tonight, and in the morning I'd feel a hell of a lot better if I knew you were staying in public places."

Myrnal ran her hands across her belt, checking the daggers she wore one by one as her fingertips passed them. "She and her parents have a tavern and it's a good one. The place is full of mercenaries, but they're the good kind, I promise. They're friends of mine and they won't let anything happen to you, especially if they know that you're in danger because someone has a bone to pick with your kid."

Myrnal paused, watching her fingers as she buttoned her coat. "...too many of them have lost their own parents over stupid s#&^ like this." The ninja shook off the memories she knew she shared with so many in her trade. "We'll take care of you, but you have to let us."

It had been about a minute and a half since Ikwame had finished speaking, and Myrnal had taken up the whole span of time with her instructions.

"Minshara and I can't afford to wonder every day whether you're still alive or not. If you didn't know my last name, it's Myrnal Shalienza. I'm sending a young woman named Yadali Volpecula to find you and see that you're safe. I've worked with her before, and she's saved my friends' lives once when I couldn't. ...I hope you're not allergic to dogs."

She opened the door and stood with one foot on the front porch. "Do not open this door until either I come back or you see an elf with a fox. If something happens because you aren't careful...." Myrnal grinned. "Your daughter will still kill me."
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Myrnal made her way to town as quickly as possible. She had two tasks. Head to find that damn half-crazed Druid, and she had to find Minshara. Both were of vital importance, but she'd decided before that helping Min's parents came first, and she'd stick with that. Besides, once she found Minshara, she wouldn't be able to do much else but follow her.

She walked into another one of the thousand or so taverns on the continent that had "dragon" in the title and asked for Yadali. There was an excited yip from the kitchen and a sleek little red fox darted out of the back room into the bar itself. Yadali poked her head around the doorframe. The petite elf's hair showed up first, being a short grey mass that stood on end like dandelion fluff.

"Hey Myrnal. You evil today?" the girl asked.

"No, damn it."

"You need something else?"

"Yes. A friend of mine is in some trouble and her parents are likely going to be targeted by somebody's hitmen next. I was hoping you could keep an eye on them tonight and, if possible, put them up here as soon as you can."

"Wait, so I'm doing security bodyguard work?" Myrnal nodded. It was close enough. "Sweeeet. I love hitmen. No matter what you do to 'em, you don't feel bad."

Myrnal grimaced. "Yeah. Kinda."

Yadali finally came all the way around the door instead of speaking with her head poking out. "Well, I can't say as I'd feel awesome about somebody bugging my parents, especially if they weren't my parents and couldn't do what my parents can in which case they couldn't just..." Yadali made chomping motions with her hands. "You know. Eat the guys and be done with it. But what's great about this situation is that they're guys, right? Bipeds as I know them?"

Myrnal pressed her fingertips to her temple. Sometimes Yadali was entirely too full of words. "Yes, I assume that they are."

"Well, good. Because transmutation is my specialty, and no matter how big the guys are... a bear is always bigger. Sir Alex! We're off!" Her fox rushed to her side, and Myrnal quietly told Yadali where she was headed.

"Just make sure nothing happens to them. I promised a friend they'd be safe."

"Snug as a bug in a bearskin rug, which will hopefully not be me by morning. Wait, why couldn't you just stay with them?"

Myrnal was hoping Yadali wouldn't ask the obvious question, but it was always hard to predict just what Yadali was going to do. "Because. I have to go chase down their daughter and make sure nothing happens to her, either."

"Oh! You don't know where she is?"

"....No."

"Well, hold on! Let me think--" Yadali couldn't have paused for more than the time it took to breathe. Stopping to think may or may not have been against her personal credo. "Yes, okay. Well. I'm going to go find her parents, and I'll send something smart out to go find your friend. Squirrels aren't smart; they can't even remember where they put their food. Birds, no. Rats! Rats are sharp little things, and we have them everywhere in your crazy cities. I'll send a bunch of them to see if they can't find her. Give me something of yours."

"...What?"

"The rats need to find you. Give me something of yours so they'll know how you smell in case you've moved around too much."

"Uh.... fine. Here." Myrnal reached into her pack and pulled out a dirty sock. "This work?"

"Oh, man. I'll say," Yadali said, taking the sock and stuffing it into a pocket. "Well, go ahead and see if you can't find her. I'll send my rodent army to get you if they locate her first."

This was insane, but like most things Yadali did her first inclination was to do something so unexpected and so bizarre that if it weren't so effective Myrnal would never be able to tolerate it.

Myrnal shrugged. "I'll hang by the docks to see if she's left already and, if not, to make sure she doesn't go without me."

"Yeah, whatever," Yadali replied, her attention span giving out on her now that things had been decided. "See ya!" With that, the elf split for the door and her fox followed her as was his lot in life.

Myrnal headed to the docks, pausing in an alley along the way. She pulled off her coat and reached into her backpack. She pulled out two cloth gauntlets to protect her arms, and tucked her pants inside her boots to ensure better mobility. She stuffed her hair down the back of her shirt to keep it out of the way, and pulled on the hood she never wore unless she was absolutely sure of the kind of work she'd be doing.

Myrnal wrapped her coat around the few belongings left inside her pack so that they wouldn't rattle, and then put it back on. She was out in her official capacity now, and anyone who detected her in the course of her work deserved to find her, and would regret it immediately.

Yadali found the house in relatively short order, and had Alex sniff around the back. He made a full circuit through the woods, pausing to mark a tree in case any nearby animals weren't aware that this was his turf to protect now.

Yadali had Alex sit next to her feet like a good gentleman when she knocked. "Yadali Volpecula, at your service!" She said toward the door. "I am neither here to harm nor kill you! Your brooding foulmouthed mercenary friend sent me! Oh," she added as an afterthought. "And Alex! He's a knight but the "sir" is optional." She nodded, satisfied that she'd adequately introduced herself.
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